Friday, February 19, 2016

Paper reflection

       While I was doing my research paper some things I struggled with was using transition words.  I would keep saying the mantis shrimp for all of my paragraphs.  I had trouble finding transition words in the right spots.  I also had problems finding websites because some of them were how to take care of the mantis shrimp and some of them didn't give a lot of information about certain topics.  That leads to me having a hard time to find diet facts because there wasn't a lot of information about it.  Some things that were easy was paraphrasing in the information.  It was easy because I didn't have a lot of punctuation problems.  I would like to work on transition words on my next paper.