Sensory Language

In my book The True Meaning of Smekday, Some sensory language I found was when they were explaining the Gorg they said. "He could not get sick and he would never tire."  So that sentence makes me think that the Gorg  is probably big and it is probably really strong because it said that is does not tire.  When it says "We'd found our way through the desert brush to another brush to another wide western highway.  Down a six- lane road with concrete driver big enough to have it's own gift shop we passed plaster box buildings and signs for chain restaurants."  That tells me that they must have been a long drive because it said, desert brush to another brush to a wide western highway".  When it said "Down a six-lane road with concrete driver big enough to have it's own gist shop."  That tells me that it is a big six-lane road because gift shops can be big.  "The near distance I could see schools of Boov ships kicking through the air like shining octopi."  That makes the book add more suspense because the Boov are looking for J.Lo and Gratuity and I want to figure out if they are going to catch them or are they going to escape.